Tuesday, November 27, 2007

दिल की चिंगारियां

To the husband, soulmate and meaning of my life:

आप से अलेहदा होके प्यार को जाना है
आपके करीब होके खुदा को छुहा है

वह पागल समंदर की लहरें
पास बुलाती है गिर्दाब में

दिल की गहराइयां को किसने देखा
मगर मेरी किस्सों को आपने सुना

मेरे हमनाफास ये ज़माने से दूर
हमने पाया सुकून आपके इलफ़त में

5 comments:

Mudit said...

he nice... bhari bharkam urdu.. i'm impressed ;)

Satyadarshini said...

thats the purpose...to impress ;-)
Waise its not complete...so do expect some changes...
Further I need to get it reviewed by some expert...:)

Gazal said...

the sea of work and commitments shall part soon....

a beautiful and touching poem...

sri are you listening!!!!

Satyadarshini said...

Gazal....thanks :)
The content of the poem is just an excuse to try some poetry and improve my Urdu...
bcos we all know how difficult its to express love...esp if its for a dear husband :)
The best words cant do justice...

Shailesh said...

yea very nice and touching